Blog #5: Beginning Feedback

On my plot outline, my instructor liked my plot and gave me feedback to make sure that it was clear how the two character’s personalities where different. I plan on doing this by working with the actors to make sure that they understand different body language to convey confidence or insecurity. I’ll also incorporate that feedback into the script making sure that Martin speaks more timidly/unsure than Camille. Since Martin is the main character, and the scene takes place in his room, I can plant objects around the room that suggests that he’s sort of a geek/underdog. For example, I can put a participation trophy on his shelf. I can also manipulate the wardrobe to fit their image accordingly.