I finished the first version of my script earlier this week, and sent the non-revised script to my actors and went over it with them. Prior to writing the script, I talked extensively about the plot line to them so that they had an understanding of what they were getting into and the characters they’d portray. I received feedback from them, mostly Martin’s actor, on the conversation between the two characters in the scene. They both loved the script. The only issue according to ‘Martin,’ was one of Camille’s line’s in which she was describing his personality. He thought it was a bit too obvious that she was trying to make sure the audience knew Martin’s disposition. I will change this line to be more subtle.