Blog #15: Script Revision

My Main issues with the script was formatting and making some of the action lines clearer. I didn’t need to add camera movements in the script; that was meant to be left for the story board. For some of the action lines, I needed to make it more specific. My instructor made a comment next to an action line that said, “Martin makes his move.” She said it sounded like Martin was advancing romantically with Camille, but in the scene Martin was making his move during the chess game.